To the Paradise (Episode 1)

9 days ago Yumt woke up at 10 AM, her mother said "Why you became lazy lately?" and then she answer "I just get tired to do many activities yesterday" after that Yumy toke a bath, and ate her breakfast, a simple conversation is begin after that,
Yumy : "Mom, do you ever see the paradise, like the other adult?"
Mother : "Yeah, do you want to see it too?"
Yumy : "Yeah, but I don't have special friend"
Mother : "why don't you search for it?"
Yumy : "It's hard to find it"
Mother : "You'll find it someday"

The conversation end when mom said that to Yumy, few days after that Yumy chat with a boy, his name is Elmmy, after 4 days they massage each other and chat, and meet too, they became a best friend, they tell about their dream to the paradise, 2 days after that Elmmy tells Yumy about his feeling to Yumy, and yeah Yumy is said about her feeling too to Elmmy, and the word of the opening journey was said "Well Yumy would you be my partner to find paradise?" and yeah Yumy said "Of Course, I'll be happy to do that" and with all that words this story is begin.

1st day of the journey

In the 1st day they just do the ordinary things, they help each other, in the 1st day they are went to Jammy is house, Jammy was a painter, he made many kind of paint, one of them were paint of the road to paradise. In the way to the Jammy house Elmmy and Yumy were red-faced, well yeah maybe they are too shy, they have a lot of problems too, one of their problem is Yumy's mother don't want her daughter to leave the house that fast, but then Elmmy did make Yumy's mother believe to him to take care of Yumy well, actually he proved him self to Yumy's mother that he can protect her well, he prove it with his act, he killed a beast who want to bite Yumy, he killed it by his own 2 hand, without weapon.
When they are almost there, rain fall, it was become a cold day, they toke shelter, Yumy is seems freezing, look at that, Elmmy give a warm hug to Yumy. after the rain stoped they continued their travel to Jammy house, and guess what? they did it, they made it to Jammy house! and little conversation begin


Elmmy : "Well Mr.Jammy, I would like to see your paint of road to paradise, can i see it?"
Mr.Jammy : "You must be want to see paradise don't you?"
Yumy : "Well kind of, no, really really want it"
Mr.Jammy : "*laugh* then you must have the key"
Elmmy : "key? what kind key?"
Mr.Jammy : "it's magic key, named patience, honesty, justice, and trust"
Elmmy : "Trust?"
Mr.Jammy : "to God, my dear"
Yumy : "Oh, why we must have sense of honesty?"
Mr.Jammy : "without honesty things will get complicated"
Elmmy : "Is that so? then how about patience?"
Mr.Jammy : "When you are want to find paradise you must have special friend rigth?"
Both : "Yeah"
Mr.Jammy : "and that sense of patience is to face you special friend"
Both : "Huh?"
Mr.Jammy : "So you two will not separate"
Elmmy : "Oh that"
Yumy : "So back to the main idea, can we see your paint?"
Mr.Jammy : "Of course, there it is"

The paint of road to paradise

After see the paint both of them stay at Mr.Jammy's house, they will continue their Journey after they have their rest time.

See you at next "To the Paradise" episode 2!

My Amazing Journey

Today I gonna begin the 1st series story of My Amazing Journey, well this story I named it "To the Paradise". This story is about 2 kids looking for the way to paradise.

Basic of the Story
basic of the story is a girl named "Yumy" is looking for a boy who will company her to look for the way to the paradise, because in the world Yumy life to find paradise you must have a "special friend" (they call it boyfriend in the real world), and then Yumy is found boy named "Elmmy" and from that moment the story begin.

Character of the story
Main character :
Yumy : 13 years old girl, with dark long hair, she like vegetables, loves cat, hates dog, love to make poetry, have 1 older sister and 2 older brother, have a best friend named "Fona", have a "Special Friend" named "Elmmy"
Elmmy : 13 years old boy, with dark brown hair, he hates fruits, love cats, love to reed books, have a best friend named "Van", have a "Special Friend" named "Yumy"
helper character :
Fona : 13 years old girl, hates cats, love dog, like to make poetry, have a best friend named "Yumy", have a "Special Friend" named "Enry"
Van : a mysterious character, age : unknown, like : unknown, dislike :unknown, have a best friend named "Elmmy"
Enry : 14 years old teenager, born with red ayes, and dark blue hair, he hates candy, hates chocolate, he likes play games, he have a best friend named "Andre", have a special friend named "Fona"
Andre : he like to say "You'll find it anyway", he is 14 years old, likes candy and anything sweet, he have best friend named "Andre", and never want to have special friend
Reffy, 13 years old girl, with long black hair, he is a taciturn kid, never talk, she just talk if there is Van.
Gerry : A persistent boy, he like Reffy, but Reffy never likes him.
Mr.Jammy : he is a painter, a good painter, he always paint anything he see
Nervivity : her name is weird in deed, her nick name is Vivi but some time Ellmy call her Vity or Nerv, she likes Gerry, unfortunately Gerry likes Reffy
Cane : he is Nervivity's best friend, they like to play cat and fish together, Cane likes Gifty
Gifty : she likes Cane, but she never said it to Cane, she is Nervivity's best friend too, they likes to pall doll together

Story creator
Well, my name is Lina, I'm 13 years old, like to make story about heaven, paradise, and so on, I named it "My Amazing Journey" because I think it is a amazing story myself. well, nice to meet you, don't be shy to leave any comment at least you can tell me about what do you think about the story and maybe you have an idea for me, just leave a comment, at any language (it's fine i can reed it, i can speak Japanese, Arabian, Indonesian, English, Korean, and so on)

Please read my story! Thanks!