About "To the Paradise"

Today I gonna begin the 1st series story of My Amazing Journey, well this story I named it "To the Paradise". This story is about 2 kids looking for the way to paradise.

Basic of the Story
basic of the story is a girl named "Yumy" is looking for a boy who will company her to look for the way to the paradise, because in the world Yumy life to find paradise you must have a "special friend" (they call it boyfriend in the real world), and then Yumy is found boy named "Elmmy" and from that moment the story begin.

Character of the story
Main character :
Yumy : 13 years old girl, with dark long hair, she like vegetables, loves cat, hates dog, love to make poetry, have 1 older sister and 2 older brother, have a best friend named "Fona", have a "Special Friend" named "Elmmy"
Elmmy : 13 years old boy, with dark brown hair, he hates fruits, love cats, love to reed books, have a best friend named "Van", have a "Special Friend" named "Yumy"
helper character :
Fona : 13 years old girl, hates cats, love dog, like to make poetry, have a best friend named "Yumy", have a "Special Friend" named "Enry"
Van : a mysterious character, age : unknown, like : unknown, dislike :unknown, have a best friend named "Elmmy"
Enry : 14 years old teenager, born with red ayes, and dark blue hair, he hates candy, hates chocolate, he likes play games, he have a best friend named "Andre", have a special friend named "Fona"
Andre : he like to say "You'll find it anyway", he is 14 years old, likes candy and anything sweet, he have best friend named "Andre", and never want to have special friend
Reffy, 13 years old girl, with long black hair, he is a taciturn kid, never talk, she just talk if there is Van.
Gerry : A persistent boy, he like Reffy, but Reffy never likes him.
Mr.Jammy : he is a painter, a good painter, he always paint anything he see
Nervivity : her name is weird in deed, her nick name is Vivi but some time Ellmy call her Vity or Nerv, she likes Gerry, unfortunately Gerry likes Reffy
Cane : he is Nervivity's best friend, they like to play cat and fish together, Cane likes Gifty
Gifty : she likes Cane, but she never said it to Cane, she is Nervivity's best friend too, they likes to pall doll together


Story creator
Well, my name is Lina, I'm 13 years old, like to make story about heaven, paradise, and so on, I named it "My Amazing Journey" because I think it is a amazing story myself. well, nice to meet you, don't be shy to leave any comment at least you can tell me about what do you think about the story and maybe you have an idea for me, just leave a comment, at any language (it's fine i can reed it, i can speak Japanese, Arabian, Indonesian, English, Korean, and so on)

Please read my story! Thanks!