6/30/2010

To the Paradise (Episode 1)

9 days ago Yumt woke up at 10 AM, her mother said "Why you became lazy lately?" and then she answer "I just get tired to do many activities yesterday" after that Yumy toke a bath, and ate her breakfast, a simple conversation is begin after that,
Yumy : "Mom, do you ever see the paradise, like the other adult?"
Mother : "Yeah, do you want to see it too?"
Yumy : "Yeah, but I don't have special friend"
Mother : "why don't you search for it?"
Yumy : "It's hard to find it"
Mother : "You'll find it someday"

The conversation end when mom said that to Yumy, few days after that Yumy chat with a boy, his name is Elmmy, after 4 days they massage each other and chat, and meet too, they became a best friend, they tell about their dream to the paradise, 2 days after that Elmmy tells Yumy about his feeling to Yumy, and yeah Yumy is said about her feeling too to Elmmy, and the word of the opening journey was said "Well Yumy would you be my partner to find paradise?" and yeah Yumy said "Of Course, I'll be happy to do that" and with all that words this story is begin.

1st day of the journey

In the 1st day they just do the ordinary things, they help each other, in the 1st day they are went to Jammy is house, Jammy was a painter, he made many kind of paint, one of them were paint of the road to paradise. In the way to the Jammy house Elmmy and Yumy were red-faced, well yeah maybe they are too shy, they have a lot of problems too, one of their problem is Yumy's mother don't want her daughter to leave the house that fast, but then Elmmy did make Yumy's mother believe to him to take care of Yumy well, actually he proved him self to Yumy's mother that he can protect her well, he prove it with his act, he killed a beast who want to bite Yumy, he killed it by his own 2 hand, without weapon.
When they are almost there, rain fall, it was become a cold day, they toke shelter, Yumy is seems freezing, look at that, Elmmy give a warm hug to Yumy. after the rain stoped they continued their travel to Jammy house, and guess what? they did it, they made it to Jammy house! and little conversation begin


Elmmy : "Well Mr.Jammy, I would like to see your paint of road to paradise, can i see it?"
Mr.Jammy : "You must be want to see paradise don't you?"
Yumy : "Well kind of, no, really really want it"
Mr.Jammy : "*laugh* then you must have the key"
Elmmy : "key? what kind key?"
Mr.Jammy : "it's magic key, named patience, honesty, justice, and trust"
Elmmy : "Trust?"
Mr.Jammy : "to God, my dear"
Yumy : "Oh, why we must have sense of honesty?"
Mr.Jammy : "without honesty things will get complicated"
Elmmy : "Is that so? then how about patience?"
Mr.Jammy : "When you are want to find paradise you must have special friend rigth?"
Both : "Yeah"
Mr.Jammy : "and that sense of patience is to face you special friend"
Both : "Huh?"
Mr.Jammy : "So you two will not separate"
Elmmy : "Oh that"
Yumy : "So back to the main idea, can we see your paint?"
Mr.Jammy : "Of course, there it is"

The paint of road to paradise

After see the paint both of them stay at Mr.Jammy's house, they will continue their Journey after they have their rest time.

See you at next "To the Paradise" episode 2!

1 comment:

  1. Hey, i've just found out that you're at the same age as me. Wow. you're amazing. Your story is so nice. It's very great!
    Why don't you try to make a book? I'm sure if this really is a book, i'll buy it until it's completed! I'd like to read the next story!
    I'm waiting for it! Keep writing!

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